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작성일 : 12-06-27 19:46

essay 참삭좀여...,..

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Topic:Imageine you have to decision. Who would you talk to before making your decision? Write a four-paragraph essay. choosing one person and two reasons explaining why. Use details to support your answer.
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If I have to make an important decision, I want to talk with my friends. There're reason why I want to talk with my friends when I have to make an important decision.
First, my friends are very smart. For example they are study well then me and they also the first or second,third class, so many people in my class think they are jenious. Also teacher acknowledge them too.
Second, they are friendly and kind to me. For example when I didn't brought the things that I need to use in classtime I sometimes borrow them and when I don't no the questions that is very hard, they help me to solve the question. Also sometimes they make me laugh.
That's why I want to talk with my friends when I have to make a important decision.



유경민 12-06-27 19:46 제가 초보여서................................................ 제가 초보여서................................................



조영신 12-06-28 08:45 There are reasons why~ For example they study better than I so they get the first, the second and the third in the class. ~ Also teacher acknowledges them, too. when I didn't bring things that I needed to use in class, I borrowed theirs. Having the hard questions that I can't answer they help me. Sometimes they make me laugh also. ~ There are reasons why~ For example they study better than I so they get the first, the second and the third in the class. ~ Also teacher acknowledges them, too. when I didn't bring things that I needed to use in class, I borrowed theirs. Having the hard questions that I can't answer they help me. Sometimes they make me laugh also. ~



이재화 12-07-05 22:09 * 비밀글 입니다. 비밀글 입니다.



이재화 12-07-05 22:09 * 비밀글 입니다. 비밀글 입니다.

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번호	제목	글쓴이	날짜	조회	추천	포인트	상태
공지	상부상조 영어질답 - 주의/참고사항… (5)	관리자	12-26	28254	0	0
96	essay 참삭좀여...,..… (4)	유경민	06-27	6677	0	5
95	첨삭 및 대답 알려주세요^^… (1)	김민정	06-14	6055	0	30
94	처음 올려보네용… (9)	김지영	06-12	6993	0	100
93	또 영작 첨삭 부탁드립니다^^… (3)	박민지	06-07	7980	0	20
92	영작 첨삭부탁드려요^^… (1)	박민지	06-05	6182	0	20
91	영작 첨삭 부탁드립니다^^… (4)	박민지	05-31	6298	0	30
90	영작 부탁드립니다^^… (4)	박민지	05-22	5976	0	30
89	영작 부탁드립니다^^… (2)	박민지	05-16	6484	2	30
88	영작 내용 오류 좀 봐주세요~~… (8)	김형윤	05-10	6152	1	50
87	영작부탁드립니다^^… (1)	이진숙	05-09	5346	0	10
86	영작 첨삭 부탁드립니다~… (1)	박민지	05-01	5944	0	20
85	영작 도와주세요ㅠㅠ… (3)	박민지	04-24	5970	0	20
84	영작 도와주세요^^… (3)	박민지	04-20	6301	1	20
83	영작 도와주세요ㅠ… (2)	박민지	04-13	5314	0	20
82	영작 첨삭부탁드려요^^… (1)	박민지	04-10	5209	0	10

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